NaNo 2013 Inspiration, Day 9

[hd-writers-mod.livejournal.com]

Which one do you like?

Us? We prefer breaking the rules!

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Comments

[josephinestone.livejournal.com]

I've always loved #6

[celestlyn.livejournal.com]

I subscribe to number one. I believe in cutting out all the extraneous words that are just there acting like fillers and not serving any function other than that. The fic will crisp and clean when all the excess baggage is cleared out.

[cyn-ful.livejournal.com]

Oh my goodness....I like to break all the rules. I need help though....I'm stuck in scene and I hate every single word of it. ALL of it.

My two people are in an airport trying to escape people chasing them. They are trying to miss their plane to cancun, hoping that the people following them will go on and get on the plane. One has and the other is waiting.

So frustrated ESPECIALLY since they keep kissing and the kissing is just not working for them. They have forced this to be honeymooners - which they technically are. One of them has the morals from about 2,000 years ago. So, yeah it isn't like them for PDA, even though this is what is pushing them forward through this scene. Their way of talking - pretending like they can't wait to be alone. grrrr

any suggestions?

[hd-writers-mod.livejournal.com]

Is it pretend relationship?

[cyn-ful.livejournal.com]

Well, that is the tricky situation. I did manage to get the out of the airport and now they are in Israel.

It was sort of a forced marriage due to certain beliefs. But yeah...We are now trying to figure out exactly who she is and quite intrigued...she may be a spy.