Oh my goodness....I like to break all the rules. I need help though....I'm stuck in scene and I hate every single word of it. ALL of it.
My two people are in an airport trying to escape people chasing them. They are trying to miss their plane to cancun, hoping that the people following them will go on and get on the plane. One has and the other is waiting.
So frustrated ESPECIALLY since they keep kissing and the kissing is just not working for them. They have forced this to be honeymooners - which they technically are. One of them has the morals from about 2,000 years ago. So, yeah it isn't like them for PDA, even though this is what is pushing them forward through this scene. Their way of talking - pretending like they can't wait to be alone. grrrr
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Date: 2013-11-09 07:09 pm (UTC)My two people are in an airport trying to escape people chasing them. They are trying to miss their plane to cancun, hoping that the people following them will go on and get on the plane. One has and the other is waiting.
So frustrated ESPECIALLY since they keep kissing and the kissing is just not working for them. They have forced this to be honeymooners - which they technically are. One of them has the morals from about 2,000 years ago. So, yeah it isn't like them for PDA, even though this is what is pushing them forward through this scene. Their way of talking - pretending like they can't wait to be alone. grrrr
any suggestions?