Interesting! I would have said both versions were NC-17, with the second more graphic of course. I guess the line might not always be clear. When I've edited fics to submit to FF, I've taken out as much overt mentions of sexual organs/activity as possible and replaced them with allusions to the same or fade-to-black.
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Date: 2011-12-27 03:24 am (UTC)