From that summary I'm able to come up with a decent plot outline that I can use to write a 12k word fic, compared to a 1-2k word fic. My major plot point outline would consist of: Introduction, Harry bumping into Scorpius, Harry brings Scorpius home with him for the first time, The dark secret revealed, Ending/possible collaring ceremony. (Sorry those are done in bulleted points but I don't know how to do that on here!) After that I'd fill in the small plot points and this is what I'm left with: Introduction Harry background/owner of the club/how he got from the war or epilogue to a dominant at bdsm club/possible hint at ‘the dark thing’ Scorpius background/mouthy little brat personality/going to Harry’s club for a little fun/possibly witnessing some things; good and bad Harry bumping into Scorpius Introduction to the club/the stations, places, in the club/possibly a scene The accident Harry’s surprise and attitude toward Scorpius More of Scorpius’ mouthy attitude/him on his knees on the floor and offering to suck Harry off or something similar Harry putting Scorpius in his place…this place is not for a fun time Possibly Harry either doing a scene with Scorpius trying to get him out of his ‘fun idea’ or showing him a scene If scene play happens then Scorpius’ reactions, and Harry sending him home to think Scorpius comes back for more Scorpius comes back to the club, at first without Harry knowing Scorpius gets Harry to do a scene/another scene Harry sends him away again and this time with a plan to see each other again Scorpius comes back to the club and meets with Harry for another scene Scorpius meets with Harry at least two more times, possibly once outside of the club If outside scene, how the public reacts/Draco/Harry’s family Harry brings Scorpius home with him for the first time Possible Scorpius POV/his impression of Harry’s house/the play room The scene/sex Aftercare/Harry’s bedroom Scorpius waking up/Scorpius questioning Harry The dark secret revealed How Harry started in the bdsm scene/how Harry became a dominant/possibly Harry’s trials in being a submissive Harry meeting the other guy/their roles in the relationship/the scene between them (Redacted due to spoilers) Harry’s spell Harry’s guilt/possible fallout from (Redacted due to spoilers) Harry sending Scorpius home to consider his options Ending/possible collaring ceremony The next meeting between Harry and Scorpius Scorpius’ decision Sex scene Possible collaring ceremony
The main plot points are the ones in bold, with the small plot points following. As I start writing, and find where my characters want to take me, all the possibles will become either scenes in the fic which would be described better in the outline or removed entirely from the outline.
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Date: 2013-09-14 01:07 am (UTC)From that summary I'm able to come up with a decent plot outline that I can use to write a 12k word fic, compared to a 1-2k word fic. My major plot point outline would consist of: Introduction, Harry bumping into Scorpius, Harry brings Scorpius home with him for the first time, The dark secret revealed, Ending/possible collaring ceremony. (Sorry those are done in bulleted points but I don't know how to do that on here!) After that I'd fill in the small plot points and this is what I'm left with:
Introduction
Harry background/owner of the club/how he got from the war or epilogue to a dominant at bdsm club/possible hint at ‘the dark thing’
Scorpius background/mouthy little brat personality/going to Harry’s club for a little fun/possibly witnessing some things; good and bad
Harry bumping into Scorpius
Introduction to the club/the stations, places, in the club/possibly a scene
The accident
Harry’s surprise and attitude toward Scorpius
More of Scorpius’ mouthy attitude/him on his knees on the floor and offering to suck Harry off or something similar
Harry putting Scorpius in his place…this place is not for a fun time
Possibly Harry either doing a scene with Scorpius trying to get him out of his ‘fun idea’ or showing him a scene
If scene play happens then Scorpius’ reactions, and Harry sending him home to think
Scorpius comes back for more
Scorpius comes back to the club, at first without Harry knowing
Scorpius gets Harry to do a scene/another scene
Harry sends him away again and this time with a plan to see each other again
Scorpius comes back to the club and meets with Harry for another scene
Scorpius meets with Harry at least two more times, possibly once outside of the club
If outside scene, how the public reacts/Draco/Harry’s family
Harry brings Scorpius home with him for the first time
Possible Scorpius POV/his impression of Harry’s house/the play room
The scene/sex
Aftercare/Harry’s bedroom
Scorpius waking up/Scorpius questioning Harry
The dark secret revealed
How Harry started in the bdsm scene/how Harry became a dominant/possibly Harry’s trials in being a submissive
Harry meeting the other guy/their roles in the relationship/the scene between them
(Redacted due to spoilers)
Harry’s spell
Harry’s guilt/possible fallout from (Redacted due to spoilers)
Harry sending Scorpius home to consider his options
Ending/possible collaring ceremony
The next meeting between Harry and Scorpius
Scorpius’ decision
Sex scene
Possible collaring ceremony
The main plot points are the ones in bold, with the small plot points following. As I start writing, and find where my characters want to take me, all the possibles will become either scenes in the fic which would be described better in the outline or removed entirely from the outline.